tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post4119895565067747080..comments2023-04-08T02:20:36.246-07:00Comments on Flash Jab Fiction: Flash Jab 12Jack Bateshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16055185636509700845noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-12828135444025661392012-05-29T17:20:40.369-07:002012-05-29T17:20:40.369-07:00Thanks for reading this, Kathleen. I admit to bein...Thanks for reading this, Kathleen. I admit to being rather surprised by the impact it seems to have on people.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-989192976921415092012-05-29T06:34:09.601-07:002012-05-29T06:34:09.601-07:00Wonderful. Tears in my eyes the moment boy meets ...Wonderful. Tears in my eyes the moment boy meets man and all the way through to the end.Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-79229002666790287262012-05-28T09:23:10.873-07:002012-05-28T09:23:10.873-07:00Thanks, Leslie. Yeah, it looks like I should remem...Thanks, Leslie. Yeah, it looks like I should remember to put a dog in more often...seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-82433466128138411022012-05-27T18:18:15.176-07:002012-05-27T18:18:15.176-07:00Had no idea where it was going. So much in so litt...Had no idea where it was going. So much in so little--very nice. I came close to crying--dogs'll do that, I guess.Leslie Karsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15779717365273916569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-15028775580953574202012-05-26T09:43:39.807-07:002012-05-26T09:43:39.807-07:00Thanks, Paul. That means a lot to me.Thanks, Paul. That means a lot to me.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-90548139440375579852012-05-26T03:28:10.057-07:002012-05-26T03:28:10.057-07:00That is a wonderful story, Seana. AJ is right. One...That is a wonderful story, Seana. AJ is right. One of the best I've read in a long time.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-82272155492211176032012-05-25T19:16:10.207-07:002012-05-25T19:16:10.207-07:00Thank you so much, AJ. As a tree fell on the prope...Thank you so much, AJ. As a tree fell on the property I live on and I came home to find I had no landline, I have hiked over to the laundromat to do the story prompt I promised to do every day in May. Your words have made the journey worthwhile.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-44207476785859930392012-05-25T17:11:12.759-07:002012-05-25T17:11:12.759-07:00This better be on everybody's "Best Of Th...This better be on everybody's "Best Of The Year" lists or I'll be raisin me some hell. Nothin' wrong with the ending either. Even hardasses love dogs. Dialogue crackles, characters cut clear as steel engravings, just the right rising tension and uncertainty of how it's gonna turn out. Beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-39795287794617244892012-05-25T15:27:06.213-07:002012-05-25T15:27:06.213-07:00Thank you, Kaye. The ending is probably a little t...Thank you, Kaye. The ending is probably a little <i>too</i> sweet for a site like Flashjab,but I'm glad you enjoyed it.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-50068717794435441462012-05-25T15:25:27.432-07:002012-05-25T15:25:27.432-07:00Thank you, Graham. I was glad to figure out that t...Thank you, Graham. I was glad to figure out that that was the place to stop.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-50965370935002264552012-05-25T15:22:27.009-07:002012-05-25T15:22:27.009-07:00Moving story with an unexpected, sweet ending. I e...Moving story with an unexpected, sweet ending. I enjoyed it very much.Kaye Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05596677617002735674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-60004877188115239762012-05-25T12:23:10.634-07:002012-05-25T12:23:10.634-07:00Great story with just the right ending.
KudosGreat story with just the right ending.<br /><br />KudosGraham Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15561493204302079903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-54631460430433514232012-05-24T23:31:42.418-07:002012-05-24T23:31:42.418-07:00Thanks, Madam Z. I really appreciate your comment....Thanks, Madam Z. I really appreciate your comment. I don't know how it is for anyone else, but I tend to second guess the stuff I write once I see it out in the public domain, so I'm very happy that this worked for you.seana grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03774794086733027289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-899120267887242073.post-78063372684240632812012-05-24T20:06:21.058-07:002012-05-24T20:06:21.058-07:00This is one hell of a good story. I was drawn int...This is one hell of a good story. I was drawn into it immediately, and didn't let go until the end. Even then, I wanted it to keep going.Madam Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00136166772469538966noreply@blogger.com